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modifier supprimer 14581 - de Emzo , 12 ans (GBR) - 2012-01-24
Chanteur : "My song "It's the end""

I have just written a song and I really need you to tell me if it's good! This is just the first verse and the chorus:

Your sitting there, on your own
Are you waiting for someone
So I go up and try to comfort you
But your leant over, head held in your hands
And you're crying, crying, baby

Am I too young to know what love realy is
Am I too old to start again
Have this time I really lost you
But I don't wanna tell myself, this is the end
Oh oh oh


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modifier supprimer 15780 - Réponse de Lise , 24 ans (FRA) - 2012-04-20

it's really good. keep going I are a born writter!!!

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modifier supprimer 15587 - Réponse de amie , 14 ans (GBR) - 2012-04-10

wow this is really good! especially for your age i loved it! cud u post some more of ti or message me it? thanks :D



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