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modify delete 40520 - from maddie , 12 y.o. (CAN) - 2023-04-22
Writer : "a poem i wrote about my cousin~hope you guys like it"

 i lie alone in the grass
picturing what we used to be
but even with all the memories
it's hard picturing you next to me

my tears water the flowers
as i watch them start to thrive
our relationship, unlike them
is far from alive

you're here but not really
your soul is far away
focus on that stupid metal box
couldn't care less about what i say

imovies, games, dances
all the memories we've made
blocked out by what that girl's wearing today
minutes, hours, days pass as you slowly fade

fade away from who you used to be
you who saw me as a friend
you who cared for family
has that really all come to an end

so forgive me for being angry
forgive me for all i've cried
because to your 'itty bitty widdle cousin'
it feels like someone has died


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modify delete 40700 - Reply from Lily , 12 y.o. (SRI) - 2023-12-22

Omg! It’s a beautiful poem...
meaningful! Keep up the good work😌🤩

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modify delete 40680 - Reply from Stella , 15 y.o. (SAF) - 2023-11-19

wow, what a beautiful poem.

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modify delete 40523 - Reply from maddie , 12 y.o. (CAN) - 2023-04-22

thank you so much, i'd love to be friends ✨

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modify delete 40522 - Reply from Madeline , 12 y.o. (CAN) - 2023-04-22

Wow, this is really moving. Would you like to be friends?

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modify delete 40521 - Reply from maddie , 12 y.o. (CAN) - 2023-04-22

hey guys this is my first post on this website and it's dedicated to my older cousin who, to me, seems to be slowly fading away. i really hope you like my poem and that you'll tell me what you think. i'd love to talk to anyone, i've been feeling pretty lonely so i'll try to be active and check every day~



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