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modifier supprimer 39932 - de Delaney , 14 ans (USA) - 2021-07-28
Ecrivain : "If I could change the world"

If I could change the world
Chaos would run amuck
A guillotine would be used
to saw off the reapers head
Then how happy we would be
lounging in the sun
Oh to live immortal
Damage comes undone
Humans darkside then would show
Dancing in the devil's heart
Though we are immortal we may tear
this world apart
But without death to set us free
The hell will come to earth
Burning down all heaven
Angels wings are turning dark
No savior great to set us free
no hope for the end
Only life to laugh as her power forever reigns
Dangling her puppets on a string
Her job becomes too much
But life herself can't die
She will decay into the ground her freedom running dry
And then our land I'm afraid will close
Our world will sing its final song
One fine glorious hymn
The stars will shine out
And hope now is nigh

Hey guys hope you like this! IF any of you has information for publishers interested in poetry please let me know!


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modifier supprimer 39949 - Réponse de Delaney , 14 ans (USA) - 2021-08-06

Thank you! I would much rather talk on my students of the world account though. Do you have one?

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modifier supprimer 39947 - Réponse de 李康訸 (CHN) - 2021-08-06

You wrote very well! I love so much. By the way, I want to be a pen pal with you. My email is likanghe2021@outlook.com we can discuss literature together

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modifier supprimer 39937 - Réponse de Delaney , 14 ans (USA) - 2021-07-29

Thank you! I'll have to check it out.

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modifier supprimer 39933 - Réponse de Amaani (GBR) - 2021-07-29

Powerful! There's a really good website called Submittable that you might like to check out where you can submit all kinds of work to different publishing companies.



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